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Everyone Shouldn't Become an Enterpreneur

Why Everyone Shouldn’t Become an Enterpreneur 1. Introduction Paragraph  2. Argument 1 Topic sentence :  Being an Enterpreneur is not easy 3. Argument 2  Topic sentence : You’ll Fail nine times out of ten 4. Argument 3 Topic sentence :  You don’t know enough people 5. Counter argument & rebutal  Some people may argue that it’s possible to start a company on shoestring budget. 6. Refrences  When you become an enterpreneur no boss to tell you differently, you can get freedom to choose your own schedule and work when you want. Building your dream product or service exactly how you decide and no tasks you’re forced to do. Everyone can be Enterpreneur But not everyone should become an enterpreneur.  First, Being an Enterpreneur is not easy.  When the enterpreneur became successful, they have to deal with taxes, people quitting, technical issues, non-stop emails, phone calls, messages, and 20 hours worth of meeting every week. Bei...
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The things that i like to do (essay)

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OUTLINE Topic : The things that I like to do 1.       Listening Music a.        Pop -           Korean song -           English song 2.       Watching a.        Music Videos -           K-Pop MVs b.       Drama / Movie -           Detective -           Mystery -           Family -           Action c.        Variety show / Reallity show -           Korean show 3.       Learn Language a.     ...
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About Indonesia

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Write! Plan your paragraph about the life of an important person or inventor in your country's history . a. What is your main topic? Write it here.    I Gusti Ngurah Rai b. What are your subtopics? Write them on the line below.       * In the Japanese occupation, Ngurah Rai had become an ally in the region of Bali and Lombok.   * Together with Ciung Wanara, the small army of Ngurah Rai, on 18 November 1946 attacked Tabanan which produced a Dutch datasemen with complete weapon surrender. Born in Badung, January 30, 1917, I Gusti Ngurah Rai was the son of a sub-district head of Petang, I Gusti Ngurah Palung. Interested in the military world since childhood, Ngurah Rai joined HIS Denpasar and then continue with MULO in Malang. Not enough to get there, he then joined the school of military cadres, Prayodha Bali, Gianyar. In 1940, Ngurah Rai was inaugurated as Lieutenant II who then continued his education at the Corps Opleiding Vo...
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Holiday Celebration That I Remember

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Write! Plan your paragraph about a  holiday celebration that you remember. a. What is your main topic? Write it here.      During my new year holiday I spent my vacation with my family . b. What are your subtopics? Write them on the line below. - Pray at Ulun Danu Bratan Temple - Go to Gitgit Waterfall - Go to Nuyan Lake  During my new year holiday I spent my vacation with my family . Many things that I do with my family.  First, in the morning we went to the Ulun Danu Bratan Temple to pray.  We used that moment because I rarely spend time with my family. After doing the praying, we go to the Bedugul to do recreation, there we can see many rare plants and the air is very cool that we rarely feel while in the town.  The second, we went to the Gitgit waterfall.  There the waterfall is very beautiful, and they set up some arena. After satisfying at the waterfall we look for lodging, in Bedugul there are so man...
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The things that i like to do

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Write! 1. Plan your paragraph about the things you like to do. a. What is your main topic? Write it here.     The three things I like to do during my free time in my new room. b. What are your subtopics? Write them on the line below. - Listening to music - Watch Thai drama or variety show and reality show - Learn korean language        Actually there are so many things that i like to do in my room. But i chose the most thing i do . First, maybe this is very ordinary thing, but for me this is a must. i have to listen some musics to get rid my stress, at least 3 songs and the song is Korean song. I don’t know why i like Korean song the most even though i don’t really understand. I have my favourite Korean group and i listen their songs 3 times a day. And i listen to music while making this story.         And the second one is watching Thai drama, variety show and reality show. I do this thing when i have fr...
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My Goals

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Goal 1     : Learn another language. Goal 2     : Get high GPA. Goal 3     : Visit Korea with my family. Conclusion  : In conclusion, I have to set the goals for myself. It might be difficult for me but as I said hard work brings success . I will concentrate on that goals and pray to the God . " 길고 짧은 것은 대어 보아야 안다 " you Wil never know until you try. Do you ever write your goals in letter ? Everyone must have their goals. I am writing this letter to myself with three goals in it . I will open this letter  4 years after graduated and decide whether I have achieved these goals . The goals I have set for myself are to learn another language, to get high GPA and to visit Korea with my family. Now, I will explain why I chose these goals and how I plan to accomplish them.              First, I want to learn another language . Now not only English i...
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Lecturers Are Responsible to Motivate the Students

1 st argument :   students success is important at every educational level, it gains significance during the college years because this phase often  represents the last formal education many students receive before competing for work. 2 nd argument :  If the lecturer doesn’t motivate the students, then it will be difficult for the students to take an interest in the lesson that the lecturer teaches. 3 rd argument :  Third, When college students are not motivated in a particular class, a common outcome is alost desire to attend class, followed by frequent absences and plummeting grades Counter-argument :  motivation must come from the student  and the lecturer doesn't have responsible to motivate the student Conclusion : E ven though the student already mature enough, the lecturer still has responsible to motivate the student.                 Motivation is a psychological feature that e...
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