An Important Day

        Have you ever thought about accepting someone in your life ? its happened to me with my brothers . I thought if only me, it would be enough. But one day they told me that i will have brothers, and i was very annoyed . 

My brother born when i was 9 years old. I told them that i won’t any brother. Because i was afraid that my parents will love my brother more than they love me. I always refused them to protect my brother. In that time i didn’t talk to them. 

And one day when my brother was 2 years old, i was very sad about my school life. Suddenly he came to me and hug me. From that time i found him that he was really cute and he made me happy. My action towards him was changed, i played with him everytime and laughed together. My parents happy when they saw us. They told me that, they will not forget about me, they love their children. 

And now i have 2 brothers, their name are Bayu and Bima. I love them so much . even though they are really naughty but it’s still normal. We made a promise, that we will make our parents happy and proud with us. I realized that it’s not bad to accepting someone in your life if you think in positive side. 

Comments

  1. I was born having a twin so I couldn't choose whether or not I wanted to be born along with a brother. I'm happy that you eventually realized how grateful you should've been.
    I have some suggestions for you. I think 'its happened to me with my brothers' should be 'it happened to me ...'

    'they told me that i will have brothers' should be 'they told me that i would have brother'

    Thank you ^^

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  2. Krisna good article that you had written there. But i think that you need to change "My brother born when i was 9 years old. I told them that i won’t any brother" into " My brother born when i was 9 years old. I told them that i didn't want any brother". Actually i really like your blog krisna. Good Job

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  3. Hi Krisna
    That's a good article, but I think you should pay attention about capitalization.
    Thank you.

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  4. It is a cool composition girl :)
    you wrote it well
    but it will be better i think if you change 'My brother born when i was 9 years old. I told them that i won’t any brother.'
    become
    "My brother born when i was 9 years old. I told them that i didn't want any brother."
    good job ;)

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  5. Hai krisna! It's amazing story. You wrote it well. Keep practicing

    Good job😊

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  6. It is good article Krisna. Keep writing

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