Lecturers Are Responsible to Motivate the Students
1st
argument : students success is important at every educational level, it gains significance during the college years because this phase often represents the last formal education many students receive before competing for work.
2nd argument : If the lecturer doesn’t motivate the students, then it will be difficult for the students to take an interest in the lesson that the lecturer teaches.
3rd argument : Third, When college students are not motivated in a particular class, a common outcome is alost desire to attend class, followed by frequent absences and plummeting grades
Counter-argument : motivation must come from the student and the lecturer doesn't have responsible to motivate the student
Conclusion : Even though the student already mature enough, the lecturer still has responsible to motivate the student.
Motivation is a psychological feature that evokes a desire to achieve a certain goal. Students have different goals on their studies. Lecturers spend most time with students and should be able to motivate them towards achieving their goals.
First, students success is important at every educational level, it gains significance during the college years because this phase often represents the last formal education many students receive before competing for work. The students developed a six-step process. The number one step being motivation. That is, motivation was consider on which the other step follow and build. The students can’t motivate by themselves and I believe that lecturers are responsible for motivating the students.
Second, If the lecturer doesn’t
motivate the students, then it will be difficult for the students to take an
interest in the lesson that the lecturer teaches. By leading students,
inspiring students, and motivate the students, the subject materials become accessible
to the students because they are willing to work a bit hard to understand them.
Third, When college students are not motivated in a particular class, a common outcome is alost desire to attend class, followed by frequent absences and plummeting grades. Students need to be motivated if they expect to succeed, and frankly, any college student especially a graduate student is already motivated. It is when these students become discouraged that a good mentor can help.
Third, When college students are not motivated in a particular class, a common outcome is alost desire to attend class, followed by frequent absences and plummeting grades. Students need to be motivated if they expect to succeed, and frankly, any college student especially a graduate student is already motivated. It is when these students become discouraged that a good mentor can help.
But in the other hand, they said motivation must come from the student and the lecturer doesn't have responsible to motivate the student. They said the student already mature enough to motivate them self.
In conclusion, even though the student already mature enough, the lecturer still has responsible to motivate the student. Because, sometimes they can be immature and lost of their interest .
In conclusion, even though the student already mature enough, the lecturer still has responsible to motivate the student. Because, sometimes they can be immature and lost of their interest .
Hi Krisna
ReplyDeleteit's good article
your vocabulary and grammar also
for my oppinion maybe you can change some word. There are:
for paragraph 2 :"was consider" should be "was considered"
for paragraph 3 : "alost" should be " a lost"
That's all from me
Thank You
Hi..
ReplyDeleteit's a good idea to wrote it.
you should recheck in paragraph 1 "lecturers spend most time" should be " lecturers spend the most time".
and the last one in paragraph 2
"motivation was consider" should be "motivation was considered"
thank you
Hi krisna
ReplyDeleteyour vocabulary is very good
But you may change students' success is important at every educational level, it gains significance during the college years because this phase often represents the last formal education many students received before competing for work.
wow your writing is very cool :)
ReplyDeleteI can understand it well
eventhough we don't have a same opinion, I really appreciate this, yeah everybody is free to share their opinion :D
but I think you have to improve your variety of vocabulary and grammar structure
please give more description in every paragraph to make it more clear
you use an appropriate style and formal enough
btw I think you make a mistake at the sentence "it gains significance during the college years because this phase often represents the last form" much better i think if you change it to be "it getting more significance during the college years because this phase often represents the last form"
Thankyou
have a good day chagi ya :*
Good article, Your opinion is very clearly.it's easy to understand.I agree with you fighting!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Krisna
ReplyDeleteThat's a good article, I can easily understand it. Your grammar is very good and your vocabulary is very variety, but I think you need to check your grammar in second paragraph. I think it would be better if you change " was consider" to be " was considered". Thank you
Keep It Up!
Hi krisna
ReplyDeleteThat's a good article
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