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My Goals

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Goal 1     : Learn another language. Goal 2     : Get high GPA. Goal 3     : Visit Korea with my family. Conclusion  : In conclusion, I have to set the goals for myself. It might be difficult for me but as I said hard work brings success . I will concentrate on that goals and pray to the God . " 길고 짧은 것은 대어 보아야 안다 " you Wil never know until you try. Do you ever write your goals in letter ? Everyone must have their goals. I am writing this letter to myself with three goals in it . I will open this letter  4 years after graduated and decide whether I have achieved these goals . The goals I have set for myself are to learn another language, to get high GPA and to visit Korea with my family. Now, I will explain why I chose these goals and how I plan to accomplish them.              First, I want to learn another language . Now not only English i...

Lecturers Are Responsible to Motivate the Students

1 st argument :   students success is important at every educational level, it gains significance during the college years because this phase often  represents the last formal education many students receive before competing for work. 2 nd argument :  If the lecturer doesn’t motivate the students, then it will be difficult for the students to take an interest in the lesson that the lecturer teaches. 3 rd argument :  Third, When college students are not motivated in a particular class, a common outcome is alost desire to attend class, followed by frequent absences and plummeting grades Counter-argument :  motivation must come from the student  and the lecturer doesn't have responsible to motivate the student Conclusion : E ven though the student already mature enough, the lecturer still has responsible to motivate the student.                 Motivation is a psychological feature that e...

teenager's music genres

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I. Topic sentence Paragraph 1 : What are their favo uri te ge nre ? p aragraph 2 : 75% of them said POP. paragraph 3 : A bout 20% of them choosed EDM. paragraph 4 : 5% choosed alternative rock   Music comes in many different types and styles from alternative , pop, hip hop ,EDM , etc. Many genres have a rich history or geograpichal  significance, a cult following or music roots that go far beyond the 20th century. And then how about the teenagers ? What are their favorite genre ? to find out, i conducted a survey. I asked each of my friends what he or she favorites genre. After that, i realized that there are three answers : Pop, Alternative, and EDM. The genre with the most answers is POP . 75% of them said POP . When i asked them about their favorite genre, almost all of them said POP. They said POP song is fun and energic. The other voter of this option said POP song also give us spirit to do something.       A bout 20% of th...

An Important Day

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        Have you ever thought about accepting someone in your life ? its happened to me with my brothers . I thought if only me, it would be enough. But one day they told me that i will have brothers, and i was very annoyed .  My brother born when i was 9 years old. I told them that i won’t any brother . Because i was afraid that my parents will love my brother more than they love me. I always refused them to protect my brother. In that time i didn’t talk to them.  And one day when my brother was 2 years old, i was very sad about my school life. Suddenly he came to me and hug me. From that time i found him that he was really cute and he made me happy. My action towards him was changed, i played with him everytime and laughed together. My parents happy when they saw us. They told me that, they will not forget about me, they love their children.  And now i have 2 brothers, their name are Bayu and Bima. I love them so much . even ...

Problem in Jakarta

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            Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia. As a capital of state jakarta would be a major point of doing any activities . Located on the northwest coast of the world's most populous island of Java, Jakarta is the country's economic, cultural and political center, with a population of 10,075,310 as of 2014. As many other cities do, Jakarta has many urban problems . One problem that has caused the loss of life in Jakarta is floods . Jakarta is very prone to floods and they can prove to be very dangerous in the city. Jakarta usually gets flooded every year, but the magnitude is not always that big. In 2007 though, flooding affected 70% of Jakarta, killed 57 people and made at least 450,000 people homeless . Flooding after heavy rainfall is also affected by certain factors , including steep and shallow river channels, lack of vegetation and concrete drainage basins that prevent the water from percolating ba...