Problem in Jakarta
Jakarta is the capital city
of Indonesia. As a capital of state jakarta would be a major point of doing any
activities. Located on the northwest coast of the world's most
populous island of Java, Jakarta is the country's economic, cultural and
political center, with a population of 10,075,310 as of 2014.
As many other cities do, Jakarta has many urban problems. One problem
that has caused the loss of life in Jakarta is floods. Jakarta is very
prone to floods and they can prove to be very dangerous in the city. Jakarta
usually gets flooded every year, but the magnitude is not always that big. In
2007 though, flooding affected 70% of Jakarta, killed 57 people and made at
least 450,000 people homeless.
Flooding
after heavy rainfall is also affected by certain factors, including
steep and shallow river channels, lack of vegetation and concrete drainage
basins that prevent the water from percolating back to the ground and causing
water to run faster on the floodplain. Insufficient drainage systems, poor
maintenance of waterways and faulty sewers also contribute to flooding.
The
cause of flooding also varies by geographical location. High tide
combined with a stormy weather and low atmospheric pressure is one of the main
causes of flooding in coastal regions. Hurricanes bring destructive storm
surges, which can quickly uplift shore water by up to several meters. A storm
surge can penetrate the beach and low-lying areas farther inland.
The solution for this problem are, Install litter traps to manage chocking of
drains along with constant maintenance, Increase and strategic placement of
drain holes on roads, Build pond(s) near flood prone areas, Concrete
reinforcement of river bank at crucial areas instead of stone and cement, build
additional or expand current reservoir to control water flow to Jakarta, and make trash
bank. The residents should collect anorganic waste and handed it to
the trash bank. So they will not throw the waste carelessly. The government and
the residents must work together to make jakarta or Indonesia save from
flood.
The cloncusion
is, just like i said before the government and the residents must work
together. We have to throw away our ego and take care of the
environment.

Hai krisna! I agree with the solution.
ReplyDeleteKeep practicing😊
Hello Chrisna.
ReplyDeleteYour article is amazing. I like it. I suggest you to change "The conclusion is" into "In conclusion". But if you want to use "The conclusion is", the comma must be deleted.
That's all and good luck :)
wow it is a very critical essay
ReplyDeleteyou are so cool in writing ;)
But according to me
it will be greater if you change "The solution for this problem are, Install litter traps to manage chocking of drains along with constant maintenance " become
"There are some solutions for this problem, such as Install litter traps to manage chocking of drains along with constant maintenance"
Good job dear ;)