Everyone Shouldn't Become an Enterpreneur
Why Everyone Shouldn’t Become an Enterpreneur
1. Introduction Paragraph
2. Argument 1
Topic sentence : Being an Enterpreneur is not easy
3. Argument 2
Topic sentence : You’ll Fail nine times out of ten
4. Argument 3
Topic sentence : You don’t know enough people
5. Counter argument & rebutal
Some people may argue that it’s possible to start a company on shoestring budget.
6. Refrences
When you become an enterpreneur no boss to tell you differently, you can get freedom to choose your own schedule and work when you want. Building your dream product or service exactly how you decide and no tasks you’re forced to do. Everyone can be Enterpreneur But not everyone should become an enterpreneur.
First, Being an Enterpreneur is not easy. When the enterpreneur became successful, they have to deal with taxes, people quitting, technical issues, non-stop emails, phone calls, messages, and 20 hours worth of meeting every week. Being enterpreneur only sounds great until you get “bonus”.
Second, You’ll Fail nine times out of ten. you might have a perfect idea and you might notice a growing trend, but with the wrong timing, the wrong resources or the wrong promotional strategy. You also be too late to capitalize on it before competitors enter the market. Jeff Bezos ( Amazon ) stated that “ENTERPRENEUR must be willing to be MISUNDERSTOOD for LONG periods of TIME.”
Last but not least, You don’t know enough people. Nowadays, business world is predicted on relationships. If you don’t have employee, customer and mentor relationships and aren’t on board to creat them, you may be “SOL” when it comes to gaining traction for your new product or service within your marketplace.
Some people may argue that it’s possible to start a company on shoestring budget. But the problem is, while you’re busy scrimping and saving every money to fund your operation, you’ve still got to buy food, pay the electricity bill and keep roof over your head. So i believe that they have to save their money before start the business.
Its good when you think to become an Enterpreneur. But you shouldn’t just think about the benefit, you have to think what problems that you might face in your business. In short, Everyone can become an Enterpreneur but not everyone should become an Enterpreneur. Because not everyone suit with Enterpreneur life.
Refrences
Duke, P. L. (2016) The Top 5 Reasons Not to Become an Enterpreneur Retrived October 6th 2017 from https://www.entrepreneur.com/amphtml/282668
Kagan, N. (2017) Why You Shouldn’t Be an Enterpreneur Retrived October 6th 2017 from https://www.entrepreneur.com/amphtml/292855
Patel, S. (2012) Why You Shouldn’t Be an Enterpreneur Retrived October 6th, 2017 from https://sujanpatel.com/business/why-you-shouldnt-be-an-entrepreneur/amp/
1. Introduction Paragraph
2. Argument 1
Topic sentence : Being an Enterpreneur is not easy
3. Argument 2
Topic sentence : You’ll Fail nine times out of ten
4. Argument 3
Topic sentence : You don’t know enough people
5. Counter argument & rebutal
Some people may argue that it’s possible to start a company on shoestring budget.
6. Refrences
When you become an enterpreneur no boss to tell you differently, you can get freedom to choose your own schedule and work when you want. Building your dream product or service exactly how you decide and no tasks you’re forced to do. Everyone can be Enterpreneur But not everyone should become an enterpreneur.
First, Being an Enterpreneur is not easy. When the enterpreneur became successful, they have to deal with taxes, people quitting, technical issues, non-stop emails, phone calls, messages, and 20 hours worth of meeting every week. Being enterpreneur only sounds great until you get “bonus”.
Second, You’ll Fail nine times out of ten. you might have a perfect idea and you might notice a growing trend, but with the wrong timing, the wrong resources or the wrong promotional strategy. You also be too late to capitalize on it before competitors enter the market. Jeff Bezos ( Amazon ) stated that “ENTERPRENEUR must be willing to be MISUNDERSTOOD for LONG periods of TIME.”
Last but not least, You don’t know enough people. Nowadays, business world is predicted on relationships. If you don’t have employee, customer and mentor relationships and aren’t on board to creat them, you may be “SOL” when it comes to gaining traction for your new product or service within your marketplace.
Some people may argue that it’s possible to start a company on shoestring budget. But the problem is, while you’re busy scrimping and saving every money to fund your operation, you’ve still got to buy food, pay the electricity bill and keep roof over your head. So i believe that they have to save their money before start the business.
Its good when you think to become an Enterpreneur. But you shouldn’t just think about the benefit, you have to think what problems that you might face in your business. In short, Everyone can become an Enterpreneur but not everyone should become an Enterpreneur. Because not everyone suit with Enterpreneur life.
Refrences
Duke, P. L. (2016) The Top 5 Reasons Not to Become an Enterpreneur Retrived October 6th 2017 from https://www.entrepreneur.com/amphtml/282668
Kagan, N. (2017) Why You Shouldn’t Be an Enterpreneur Retrived October 6th 2017 from https://www.entrepreneur.com/amphtml/292855
Patel, S. (2012) Why You Shouldn’t Be an Enterpreneur Retrived October 6th, 2017 from https://sujanpatel.com/business/why-you-shouldnt-be-an-entrepreneur/amp/
Hi, Krisna. Great argumentative essay. But I dont see any in text citation in your essay. I think you might want to add some.
ReplyDeleteI can see good relation between your paragraphs and topic. Good job
Hello Krisna, Glad to see your essay, I think your essay was well-structure. I just want to give you some suggestion.
ReplyDeleteFirst is come from this sentence "When you become an enterpreneur no boss to tell you differently," better if you change it to become "When you become an entrepreneur nobody boss will tell you differently,"
Second is only my inputs if you don't want to change it is okay, its come from this sentence "First, Being an Enterpreneur is not easy." become "First, Being an Enterpreneur is not a piece of cake" its because I thinks it will make a readers will curios about that topic sentences.
Thirds, I found some typo word like "enterpreneur" should be "entrepreneur". In the fourth paragraph, "creat" should be "create" and don't forget to capital "i" in the concluding sentences in your fifth paragraph.
The last thing, you need to give some space each of your paragraph so it will easily for readers to analyze it.
Thats all from me Thank you and keep it up Kriss ^_^
Hi krisna nice post..your writing is well structured. Just a little correction in writing capitalization. Don't forget after comma (,) sign the next word still be written in small font. Also the entrepreneur word should not always written in capital except if tou write that word after full stop sign. Thank you kris!
ReplyDeleteHello, Krisna. It is luck to read your essay. The structure and the grammar of your essay are very good. The main topic and every paragraph' s topic sentence are very clearly.
ReplyDeleteBut for your essay, I have some suggestions: Firstly, some paragraphs, you already underline the topic sentence,and some paragraphs,you underline the conclude sentence, I think you you should underline all the topic and conclude sentence.
Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi krisna, your article is great and you really did a great job. My suggestion for you is I think it’s better for you to change “its” into “it is good when you......”. Overall, I like how you desribed your article because I can see the main idea or your supporting sentences so clear enough to understand. Good job and keep it up :)
Hello, krisna, ur essay is good, with a well structure. but if u can add more ur views is better. i also saw u have a good improvement on your written. thank u.
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